Kiema

Name: Kiema. Those that are close to him call him Kie.

Age: Kiema is eighteen years old. He appears to be sixteen.

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Home World: Midgar

Alignment: Evil and chaotic

Appearance: Kiema is 6'1" and weighs 160 lbs. He has purple hair and pink eyes. Kiema wears a short sleeved shirt and baggy pants. His back has a tattoo of a cross and he has spiral tattoos on his arms . His body type is semi-muscular and thin.

Class: Dark Knight

SubClass: Dragoon

Elements:

Mastered: Darkness
Secondary: Fire
Tertiary: Light


Fighting Style: When in battle Kiema charges in with his sword. Kiema is a short-ranged fighter that uses an aggressive fighting style where he tears through his enemies.


Affinities: Kiema is tidy and humble. He is a good cook and keeps his place well stocked with supplies he can obtain from stores.


Good Qualities: Kiema is good at Swordsmanship and tearing through weaker enemy defenses with his sword.


Bad Qualities: Kiema's not good at defending and and dodging enemy attacks. He is also inadept at long ranged weapons.

Personality: Kiema is normally shy. He only speaks when he needs to around others he don't know . He has a happy and energetic side though he rarely shows it in front of others. In battle he becomes a psychotic lunatic that slaughters all in his path until his enemies are defeated. He uses his class's special ability when he is weary or weakened.

history: Eighteen years ago Kiema was born in Midgar. His father was a member of the Shinra security department while his mother was a scientist. He was raised to believe that he should be kind but stopped believing that when his father was killed on a mission and a dangerous creature killed his mother while she was field researching. He was orphaned at the age of twelve. He kept on getting dark thoughts from that day on. Kiema practiced his combat skills from that day until he turned sixteen. He met a girl on his sixteenth birthday and they started to get close to each other. He adored her until she was killed by a roaming group of thugs. He practiced harder since that day. When he turned eighteen he started thinking about what to do with his life.
Pictures: None, optional.

Need to work on your history a bit, some things are not exactly clicking together. At one point you said He adored her until she was killed by a roaming group of thugs but you don't tell us WHO he adores. See what I mean?

I edited the part. Please tell me if I need to edit more of it.

Still would like more detail really but........Eh well I've seen less get through so Approved.