Niles Wakefield

Name: Niles Wakefield
Age: 32

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Home World: Midgar but is from Earthland.

Elemental usage:
Primary: Dark
Secondary: Fire

Class: Gunner
Subclass: Illusionist

Weapons: Guns

Fighting style: Really any. I mean a gun can be used from all length of distances. Long is probably the best though.

Good Qualities: He is a very good people person. He has a great sense of humor. He loves donuts; more than cookies. Niles is very skilled with a gun; he also is able to perform tricks with a gun, such a twirling it into its holster. He is able to reload a gun faster than you can blink. He has a way with the ladies. He is able to charm the ladies. Also he does have has a way with the men; he knows how to approach them sexually. Niles is good at dodging attacks, he is able to do so much more than others. He can create illusions, and good ones at that.

Bad Qualities: He finds it hard to control himself when he is provoked; the only person able to control him when he get like this is Kichi. It is Kichi’s heart filled nature that makes him become calm. He tends to be very sarcastic and an ass at times. Being bisexual creates some problems when he begins to hit on straight men. ( Note: this is for humor I will not be hitting on everyone in there mother) When someone damages his cigarette he gets pissed. Niles magical defenses are a bit below average. When Niles does get hit, the damage is slightly more than what it should be.

Affinities: Good but because of his sort temper he tends to become chaotic. (Is Evil/Chaotic At the Moment)

Appearance: Niles is a strong muscular man with a six pack and pecks that clearly can be seen from his shirt. Niles has silky light brown hair which flows down passed his right eye. He wears a white and blue stripped dress shirt tucked into his light blue jeans. Over his shirt is a black dress jacket, which is unbuttoned. He wears black tied dress shoes. Usual has a cigarette hanging out of his mouth. He keeps a pack of cigarette in the front jacket packet, which is clearly visible. Around his waist he wears a black leather belt. On the right side of his belt is a black holster; on the back of his belt is another holster.

History: Niles Wakefield was born to Michael Wakefield. Michael was the mob’s number one assassin; so around the time of Niles birth they made him one of their bosses. Michael was able to kill any one they asked him to, be it one or fifty people, Michael could kill them all at the same time. How? He had the quickest shot in the world, along with one of the fastest guns. Michael created this gun himself. Nile’s father upon Nile’s birth decided it was best for him to retire from the business. The mob did not like this, so upon hearing about this they put a hit out on Michael. Michael got word of the hit, for the safety of his family decided it was best to leave. His father left him a note along with his best gun. The note read “Grow up and become better than the rest. I love you. – Daddy”

Niles took these words to heart. He grew up to train himself in the art of weaponry. He trained forcefully at shooting ranges and began to master the movements of his gun in no time. By the age of 20 Niles had become the best with a gun the world had ever seen. He could fire a gun faster than anyone could think about it. Niles never hearing about if his father died searches for him or for word of his death.

((FOLLOWING IS LESS DETAILED BC IT ALL CAME THROUGH RPING))

Niles soon fell in love with Cecil D-Wol-fair ((Will be rped as NPC)). They were best friends. He, Kichi, and Cecil lived happy together. Niles soon fell in love with Cecil and that is when all the problems began.

Cecil was unsure of loving another man because he was religious. This caused Niles to feel much pain, he was able to handle it for some time. Then the pain became so great he couldn't handle it anymore. He soon went to encounter Shade Leonheart. The fight left him without a soul, heart, and any memories. He had turned evil, and went on his way through life.

Kefka encounter Niles, and saw his power could be used to help him in his plots to take over. He took Niles under his wing. Niles now serves Kefka....very.....very....loyally.

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Due to how Light and Darkness aren't weak to anything other than those two......you need to switch one out. You can have light and darkness magic without it being your primary or secondary.


Also you need some fighting weaknesses.

Since they are both the same thing i made them one....and i edited the 2nd to fire

Kefka....it got to be one or the other and still need a fighting weakness in your bad quality section.

personality weaknesses are not exactly something that makes you fight worse.

added and added.... damn carry over ><

Eh guess that is enough. APPROVED

Bump for addition of subclass and change in good/bad qualities

You just added another good thing and left the bad things as is, please balance it out.

added

Seems fine to me APPROVED

Weapons!

Name: Tsutsu

Type: Gun

Element: Non-elemental

Effect: Delivers more damage to the enemy than his average guns. The gun is able to fire bullets at much faster rate then an average fire arm; able to hold more bullets then the average hand gun.

Description: It is a shinny silver one handed .45 caliber magnum. The gun has a black handle, which padded allowing for lesser recoil. The less recoil allows for a faster in between firing time. Contain a round barrel chamber which hold ten .45 bullets. Its long double neck barrel allows for a stronger faster firing of the bullet. Its trigger is much lighter allowing for the shooter to fire faster.

History: Niles was young when his father got into trouble with the mob. His father was actually a member of the mob; he was one of there crime bosses. His father was a skilled assassin able to kill someone with a bullet all while drinking a cup of coffee. When his father decided to leave the mob in order to provide a life of safety to his new born baby boy and bride the mob did not take this so kindly. What were they without Michael Curry? They put a hit out on Michael; who for the safety of wife and kids left. His father left him a gift before he left; the gun was this gift. It was his father’s best weapon.

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: The 2nd Tsutsu

Type: Gun

Element: (According to the special abilities when can surround our bullets with any given element) The gun itself is metal. After three posts you can switch the element of the bullets again.

Effect: Delivers more damage to the enemy than his average guns. The gun is able to fire bullets at much faster rate then an average fire arm; able to hold more bullets then the average hand gun.

Happy Trigger Finger.
Allows Niles to fire all 8 of his bullets at one time.

Description: It is a shinny silver one handed .45 caliber magnum. The gun has a black handle, which padded allowing for lesser recoil. The less recoil allows for a faster in between firing time. Contain a round barrel chamber which hold ten .45 bullets. Its long double neck barrel allows for a stronger faster firing of the bullet. Its trigger is much lighter allowing for the shooter to fire faster.

History: Niles had learned that sometimes only having one gun was not always the best when in large situations. He had to have two weapons in order to defend himself from the people around him. What happened if he lost his gun in a battle? He would be screwed. He designed a gun that was similar to his other one but had a new ability.


Name: The 2nd Tsutsu Version 2.0 ((UPGRADE))

Description: It is a shinny silver one handed 50 caliber magnum. The gun has a black handle, which padded allowing for lesser recoil. The less recoil allows for a faster in between firing time. Contain a round barrel chamber which hold ten 50 caliber bullets. Its long double neck barrel allows for a stronger faster firing of the bullet. Its trigger is much lighter allowing for the shooter to fire faster.

Improvements: Niles is able to fire bullets that are 1.5x regular bullet damage. The gun can now hold 16 magnum bullets at once, and the ability Happy Trigger finger now has increased to 16 bullets fired with the ability.

Drawbacks: The trigger can get stuck, causing it to malfunction, causing Niles to not be able to use the gun for a duration of 5 post. Malfunctions after 2 post uses. The gun's new size allows for aiming to be by about 6 inches inches causing Niles to think about who he aims, and decrease in the speed of bullets slightly by .3 making the bullet speed .7X its original speed.

Encantment: Can be turned off and on.

Firstly fix the elements as you talking about the gun being metal not Earth.

Also lets look at the upgrade......1.5 damage boost, double ammo size, and now you can shoot all 16 bullets out at once.

A malfunction that only happens after 5 post *yet to even see that and I fought you a few times* Only two inches less accurate, and the only a .3 reduction in bullet speed.

The malfunction is good enough for the 1.5 boost, two inches less accurate though is not enough for the double ammo size, and the .3 speed drop in bullet seed *bullets are fast as hell so not much of a diff* not enough for the ability to shoot out all 16 at once.

We going over everything to see what is and isn't ok for here unlike the broken FF with had wonky rules.

fixed it a bit

5 post duration

off by 6 inches

.7 speed

oh i added the on and off enchantment forgot to post that up here

Kuja, since you have to be away for awhile, I'm placing a temporary approval on this since he fixed everything you asked for.

Kefka, when Kuja can come back and he asks anything else, you two can work it out then. When it comes to multiples of improvements and fractions of numbers, blah blah stats, weighing out the multiples of drawbacks, I don't touch those things o.O

i mean seriously... how does one judge aim off by 6 inches or .7 speed of a bullet when in RP? O.o

As I said before, temp Approved

Spells:

Name: Bullets rage

DESCRIPTION: Niles summons a small amount of dark energy. Using the dark energy he summoned he begins to fire rapidly. He is also able to reload at a faster speed than he normal is able. He fires up to a twenty five bullets in a matter of seconds at the direction of his enemy.

Cost: 50

Class: Offensive

Element: Dark

Range: Long

Duration: 1

Effect: Causes Medium Dark Damage

History: Niles trained himself to be the fastest shot in the world. He would set records for himself and try and out do his former firing speed, until he got to the point where it was almost to do so. He came upon a way to out do himself once again. He decided using his knowledge in the art of dark magic would allow him to do so. This spell was the result of him trying to out do himself.


Name: Dragon Bullet

Description: Niles fires a bullet from his gun. The bullet rips of the barrel of the gun. Once out it explodes. Out of the explosion of dark energy, and all black dragon forms. He is about five feet high and about four feet across. He looks just like a regular dragon. The dragon launches himself at the target(s) at a fast speed. He does Heavy Dark damage upon impact.

Cost: 50MP

Class: Open

Element: Dark

Range: Long

Duration: 1

Effect: Forms a dragon which attacks the targets doing Heavy Dark Damage.

History: Michael Wakefield taught his son many things about weapons. He taught him how to fire them correctly, hold them, aim them, and more. Michael Wakefield was one of the few men in the world that knew how to manipulate the shape of a bullet upon its exited of the barrel of the gun. He realized that using magic and quickly gathering the magic into the bullet the moment it left the barrel was the key to manipulating its shape. Niles' learned this information from his father. He learned to change the shape of the bullet with magic into all sorts of forms. The dragon form came from one of these trial and error practices.

Name: Bullets rage Version 2

Description: Niles summons a small amount of Dark energy. Using the dark energy he summoned he begins to fire rapidly. He is also able to reload at a faster speed than he normal is able. He fires up to a fifty in a matter of seconds at the direction of his enemy. Move is the exact same as the original version just more bullets.

Cost: 100

Class: Offensive

Element: Dark

Range: Long

Duration: 1

Effect: Causes heavy damage depending on the amount of bullets that hit.

History: Niles trained himself to be the fastest shot in the world. He would set records for himself and try and out do his former firing speed, until he got to the point where it was almost to do so. He came upon a way to out do himself once again. He decided using his knowledge in the art of light magic would allow him to do so. This spell was the result of him trying to out do himself. Niles out did himself after this, making a faster version of his former spell.

Alright, Bullets Rage confuses me....
You're summoning light energy for a darkness effect?
Also, if you want him to have the ability to reload at a faster speed, then pay for the speed.
At the cost you currently have for the damage you want, it's 1 MP per bullet covering that alone.

Dragon bullet.... That dragon is the size of a summons, Kefka -.- Tone it down. We made Fenik totally nerf his lion spell because it twitched too close to a summons, and the same needs done with this hun.

Bullets rage Version 2
100bullets
Fired in a speed described in a matter of seconds
Heavy Darkness Damage
That's ALOT of heavy dark damaging bullets... for 1 MP each, okay, but with the added Haste speed for reloading? Again, like I said with the first spell, add more for the speed you want.


I know this all carry over stuff, but like Kuja said, we have to look over everything again with the edits made for this particular site to run smoothly. So please don't take offense to what's pointed out.

Sorry thought I changed all the dark to light


as for bullet's rage 2 no Kin the thing as a whole does heavy damage

Its still 100 bullets to deal with. That's ALOT coming at someone at the same time. As I tried to explain, your MP costs average at 1MP per bullet because these are not "normal" bullets. They have an element merged into them. So 50MP and 100MP is fine for that

But as I stated before, if he's reloading at extra speed, that speed has be paid for too.

5 feet long and 4 feet wide is big enough for a spell that turns into a creature.

25
five by 4
50

So far, we may be going by list that Yuna posted, which is far similar to what you are used to, my crazy Kefka XD.

Now Haste is 30MP ((50% faster)) So I want to be sure you are dealt fairly.

I'll accept 50MP alone for spell #1 for both damage and added speed, ((since we go by multiples of 10 here, not 5))

The same with the 3rd spell. I'm going by the Tier 3 strength of Holyra ((70MP)) in the list since the two Elements are connected to each other in the elemental graph ((so I'm compromising their Tier strength to coincide with each other)) and with the added cost of Haste, the cost balances out perfectly in my opinion.

Well done and thanks for working with me on this hun!

All deemed APPROVED!!

Each Good Quality is color coded to match its downside

Form


Name: Michael Wakefield

Magic: 400AP

Good qualities: His speed is increased by 3X.
He is able to fire bullets at a faster rate. He can fire bout five bullets in one second. In order to fire faster he is able to reload faster also.
His right arm can turn into a gun. It is able to fire high powered bullets at the enemy (kinda like a big ass shotgun that can fire at longer distances). It is 50% stronger than his regular gun.
Niles is able to do 2x dark magic
Niles spells do 2x damage
Niles had 50% better chance of avoiding attack using act of illusionist.


Bad Qualities
His physical defenses are lowered by 3x.
He takes double damage from Light Magic.
His shotgun arm is 50% slower(firing speed....like how fast bullet shoots) and takes one post to switch his arm back into regular form
Niles can only perform versions of the Bullets rage
Niles magically defenses are lowered by 50%.
Niles has to use his guns in all of his spells and attacks because of their connection to him.

Description: Niles in anger begins to summon a large amount of both fire and dark magic. The two elements begin to twirl around him. They fly around not coming in contact with each other for a few moments; but the moment the dark and fire elements collide with equal forces, and explosion forms. The explosion transforms Niles. It transforms his clothing and appearance. His hair grows and becomes longer, and his aura begins to glow light. (Look below). He takes the exact appearance of Krad from Dn Angel. This is actual the appearance his father had. So he turns into his father.




Past: Niles was never the weak and always thrived to be the best at everything. He had come to learn that with the help of his magic he could do almost anything. He could bend and shape his body into different object, make himself fire faster. Anything! He could do it if he tried. This came in handy when he encountered one of his father’s killers.

Niles was on the Earthland planet searching for his father’s Mobster killers. Niles had gotten word that one of the bosses was nearby. He went to the nearby town and found the hideout of the mobster. He entered the large compound. It was grand and had paintings and statues all over the walls, expensive carpets, everything. This place was grand. It also had something else. Upon entering Niles saw someone standing upon the edge of the stairway above.

The man laughed maniacally “So Nice to see you Niles Wakefield it is a peaty you have to die! You look so much like your father, what a shame! He was a fool like yourself” He laughed again. Suddenly a hundred men appeared out of no where. “Now it is time for you to meet your father in hell!”

The rage inside him built up, because of this man. He was one of his father’s killers and was now bashing his father. Niles transformed killing all of the men easily. Seth watched in horror as the man he had killed son transformed into the spiting image of his father. Seth attempted to escape, and Niles but Niles stopped him from doing so.

How Niles killed Seth is still a mystery….

You don't have a drawback for the red >>

He's going to have 75% better chance at avoiding attacks using illusionist ((along with the speed increased 5x)) ?? Um.... so even with the drawbacks of extra damage, he's virtually impossible to hit???

The drawback for the 75% needs to equal this. His magical defenses would need to be the same 75% decrease to match the advantage

edited XD

Considering the ONLY spells Niles has are his gun spells, how is that a drawback at all?

And as I mentioned before, his speed is hiked up 5 times more, and stacked with an additional 50% at avoiding attacks. Now please understand, the way I'm seeing this, it's two advantages that serve the same purpose, yet just worded differently to achieve a double whammy to avoid anything thrown at this guy.

See my concern?

My point with is their drawbacks are different causing a more downside. The downsides out way the upsides

and no kin i have two spells that are not Bullets Rage.

i see your point but i am i want to be able to keep my stuff if i just do more drawbacks i mean others have it so...anyway lets work together