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Fenik
| Subject: A.O. :: Feel the Random October 22nd 2010, 9:18 pm | |
| Name: A.O. (Ace Oraiyan)Age: 25Race: HumanGender: MaleHome World: Earthland (Now Resides in Spira)Elemental usage: RANDOMNESS AND YOUTH (Non Elemental ; Wind)Class: Black BeltSub Class: NinjaWeapons: Fists and Legs and the occasional RANDOMNESS (Basic Weaponry like knuckle duster, nunchaku, bo-staff, that stuff) Fighting style: He likes to randomly change between his fighting styles. He is a master of several, and each one is as deadly as another, in some way. Having high martial arts skills, gives him above average attack, high defense, speed, and agility. He trades that for his far low, even pathetic, magic attack, magic defenseGood Qualities: He has speed that is hard to compare with, maybe an Ostrich. He can really throw a punch. He also has THE POWER OF YOUTH!!!! This causes his fighting styles to serve as weapons, using this power, he can fight with mastery over several fighting styles, and a couple basic weaponry. He is also quite popular among the population of blitzball fanatics, for his extremely powerful kicks, though he's never touched a blitzball in his life.Bad Qualities: THE POWER OF YOUTH MAKES HIM EXTREMELY LOUD AND IRRITATING, CAUSING HIM TO TALK QUITE OFTEN LIKE THIS!!!!! THAT INCLUDES USE OF A LARGE AMOUNT OF EXCLAMATION POINTS AND SOMETIMES I'LL LET GO OF THE SHIFT KEY WHILE MAKING EXCLAMATION POINTS!!!!!111!!!!1!!!!!!
Also, because of that he can have trouble getting along with people (like Mari) who hate loud people. He has low magical skills, which cause him some trouble with Casters like Mari, in fact, you could say that he is her opposite. Any spells he has are based on luck while the rest are physical attacks. He has really, REALLY pathetic magical defense.Affinities: YOUTHFUL!!!! (Neutral Lawful)Appearance: He stands about 5'11". He has black hair, and looks rather asian in skin tone. His eyes are black. He generally wears a red turtle neck, with a darker red set of patterns on the front, wearing white all the rest around himself. He has a white jacket that is always open and cuts off at his middle ab line. The right sleeve of it flows into a gauntlet, while the other doesn't do anything special. The jacket has a red pattern around it. On the shoulders is a mantle.
He wears white athletic pants as well. This too has a red pattern on it. He wears a black cloth belt, and dark red pair of shoes. (See Picture)History: He was born into a rather YOUTHFUL family. At the time the parents were about twenty, and so full of youth, they put Ace into martial arts classes, at age 3. He easily mastered these using the power of youth he was born with, in two years, taking down the master of the dojo, meaning age five. He was a fine fighter. Except one detail escaped him for a while. This was the fact that the older his parents got the less youthful they became. Of course, Ace was the pinnacle of youthfulness. A lot of people shunned him for it.
This allowed him to go into further training with martial arts. Not only was he a black belt at age five, but at age seven, he was a rainbow belt (there were so many stripes he had his own title). By age 15 he had so many belts in martial arts, they just gave him a chain as a belt and made him stop taking classes, as the dojo masters were being dishonored. He was so youthful however, that he continued his training.
It was around age 17 when he noticed his parents weren't as youthful, and were becoming old. He couldn't stand the thought of becoming old, and began a nearly religious regiment of YOUTH! With the drill that will pierce the heavens, he searched the world for a person who could possibly be as YOUTHFUL as him. He began talking loudly, and losing friends because of this thing he had going.
He traveled to Spira in search of this YOUTHFULNESS!!! By illegally speaking on a shipping airship and riding it to said location.
He met Kiyuki, who actually considered that 'POWER OF YOUTH!!!!' thing to be a much better alternative of New Yevon, which he despised for it was like a hypnotism to get rid of youth, and joined Kiyuki in his YOUTHFUL rebellion.Pictures: Name: Dual VajraType: Dual VajraElement: Fire/MetalEffect: This strange pair of weapons can cut through most types of metal, up to 2 centimeters of steel-strength metal, 4 centimeters of copper-strength metal, without the effort behind it cutting. This cuts armor half as well. This also clears Ace's mind a bit allowing him to perceive time at 95% its normal speed slowing everything down in his mind just a little tiny bit.Long/Short range: ShortDescription: These weapons are both nine inches long from point to point. Three inches in the middle serve as a grip for Ace's hands so he can fight with these. Using these, isn't much like him throwing punches, though the extra three inches of reach either direction does seem to help. See the picture for more details. Though they look blunt, these weapons are sharpHistory: Ace was hunting around for a while in Spira, which is how most people end up with the things they have nowadays. This was before he met Kiyuki, and at the time, he was considerably bored, and still looking for someone as YOUTHFUL as himself. In his hunting, he happened upon a minor religion... actually it was more like a nature cult, some kind of cross between Wicca and Buddhism. Whatever the case, they seemed to find some sort of god-like spiritual flow from these little ritualistic weapons. It was odd seeing a weapon being worshiped like it was being. When Ace decided to check it out and see what the whole buzz of it was about... well... he bit off a little more than he could chew.
He was captured, and imprisoned for several days. Of course, he managed to get out of that little situation. But in doing so, some jerk planted the Dual Vajra on his person. Ace carried these weapons with him for a few day, unaware of their presence until the cult was hunting him. Ace isn't always random, so he knew that several cultists against himself was unfair odds. However, he DID know that they wouldn't harm their precious god-weapons or whatever the Vajra were to them. So he quickly put them up for a good round of combat. He noticed that he was really knocking some heads with these things. He figured out that the Cult was, in fact, evil, worshiping nature to harness its power to destroy the world. Cults are always crazy like that.
His sense of justice and good-of-the-world, caused a strange reaction in the Vajra's giving him an insane amount of power and skill. The power of the gods that the Cult was after, he used this power to wipe out the Cult for the good of the world. Ever since then, he's kept these weapons around, trying to figure out how he'd ever obtain power like that ever again, for the good of humanity.Picture: Two of these. RANDOM SPELLSPlease note that all random spells only use one effect per cast. Name: Random FireDESCRIPTION:Two effects are present. Depending on the opponent's gender, this will cause an extremely rude gesture towards them and then a fire spell.
Male: A figure made out of fire raises from the ground in front of the user(Ace). This figure is a giant hand with a single finger raised in a quite rude gesture. Afterwards, a voice from the heavens shouts out, "WHAT THE F*CK!?" and then the figure explodes into a fiery blast, damaging everyone but Ace (the user) within 10 feet. Female: Ace turns around his back to the enemy. From this position, he will rip a huge one, which bursts into flames and burns the enemies in its path.Cost: 80 APClass: OffensiveElement: FireRange: 10 Feet (Both)Duration: Instant CastEffect::: Male: Tier 1 fire damage to all enemies within a 10 foot radius of a giant rude gesture. Female: Tier 1 fire damage to all enemies in the way of a 10 foot long blue-angel.History: The gods decided that Youtube Poop was funny and therefore created this randomizing spell that would satisfy their every want in a fire spell. Ace uses this to get a quick laugh out of a battle.Name: Random IllusionDESCRIPTION: Depending on the opponent's power level as compared to the user (current post count) it will cause one of two effects. This will require eye-contact to work.
Weaker: The opponent will suddenly believe that they are a slice of pepperoni pizza and that Ace is a starving mofo that wants to eat the pizza. Stronger: The opponent will suddenly believe that Ace is a slice of pepperoni pizza and that they are now a hungry mofo who wants to eat the pizza.Cost: 50 APClass: SupplementaryElement: Non-Elemental (Illusion)Range: Single enemyDuration:2 postsEffect: Weaker: Causes the confusion Status for 2 posts, and the enemy is now afraid of Ace. Stronger: Causes the berserk Status for 2 posts, and the enemy will now try to eat Ace.History: An experimental spell that the gods created while they were up there smoking their god-weed. They decided to write down their thoughts to make an epic spell that could shatter the heavens, however, their only thoughts they wrote down was, 'Pizza'. After that they spent the rest of their time while High eating mountains of pizza. This spell was the result of this. Ace uses this to mess with enemies.
Last edited by Fenik on November 8th 2010, 5:27 pm; edited 6 times in total | |
| | | Tidus
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Spira Maximum AP: 470
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random October 22nd 2010, 10:08 pm | |
| ...You CAN'T be serious.
...Okay, let's work from the top.
Basic weaponry... ...What does this mean? I mean, as a Black Belt/Ninja, he has access to the weapons of those classes. So, clarify. (Also, invest in some knuckle dusters. Trust me. You don't wanna punch a Behemoth barehanded.)
Cheetas travel in excess of 60 MPH. You cannot run that fast. Humans aren't built for it. Tone it down.
...Luck. Yeah, no. See, if we give you high Luck, that's, basically, a license to godmod. Can't do it.
Also, please mention, in weaknesses, your abysmal Magic Defense.
...And, now, the history. USUALLY, I don't pick on these, but, this, I HAVE to.
To start with, in Spira, the only "dojo" would be that of Yevon's Warrior-Monks. And yevonites can practically recite their entire holy book from memory. That would mean that, so driven by the dogma Yevonism put in place, he'd be a fervet SUPPORTER of New Yevon, not against it, as you say.
On another note, at age 3, he'd, likely, be too young to START the training, anyway. It takes about the time you claim, 2 years, to get a Black Belt, if you're good. (I think.) However, children are rarely disciplined enough. He'd, likely, be reaching his Black Belt at age 15. ...However, if he kept up in that style, by 25, he could, perhaps, be at the level you claim. A black Haori vest with the dojo's symbol (Think the Turtle School of DB/Z/GT) is more likely than a chain belt, but, that's aesthetics.
Other than that, this CAN be a workable character. | |
| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random October 22nd 2010, 10:25 pm | |
| Oh, but I AM serious. >D
But seriously, I edited OUT the cheetah speed. (I'll save it for later)
Basic weaponry was edited in.
Luck Removed, Magic Defense of a worm, added in.
Home World changed to a place more likely to have fighters like so. Also the only reason he achieved Black Belt so quickly, was because he knocked out the Dojo Masters with their own style using THE POWER OF YOUTH!!!1!!!11!!! Of course, he trained with all of the fighting styles (which will serve as his main weaponry, to which I have to choose the Main-est one).
Is it good now? | |
| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random October 28th 2010, 7:56 pm | |
| BUMP... if there is anything else wrong with this, please feel free to trash this as I found a much more workable character idea. | |
| | | Tidus
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Spira Maximum AP: 470
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random October 28th 2010, 8:55 pm | |
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| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 3rd 2010, 7:48 pm | |
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| | | Rinoa Heartilly
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Balamb Maximum AP: 2500
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 3rd 2010, 10:16 pm | |
| For those who don't feel like doing math in here, yet you want to get technical...
2cm = 0.8 inches
4cm = 1.6 inches
What exactly do you mean by "this cuts armor half as well"?
And for the third effect, ...HUH?
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| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 4th 2010, 5:21 pm | |
| It cuts armor half as well. As in, if they cut into a person's armor, if it is made of steel, they only cut 1cm and copper armor 2cm.
And its third effect: Everything seems to move 5% slower to him while he wields them, though they don't move like that to everyone else. So every 9.5 seconds would run like 10 to him. | |
| | | Rinoa Heartilly
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Balamb Maximum AP: 2500
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 4th 2010, 6:40 pm | |
| Make up your mind on the cuts. You say 1cm and 2cm, where you're template says 2cm and 4 cm.
I just needed the "cuts armor half" clarified to be sure you did not mean any armor buffs..
So the 3rd effect is only a .5 difference, alright.
Clarify the cutting depth I stated at the beginning and bump again | |
| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 4th 2010, 8:31 pm | |
| It can't be any clearer really, it simply says that it doesn't cut through armor as well... | |
| | | Rinoa Heartilly
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Balamb Maximum AP: 2500
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 4th 2010, 8:57 pm | |
| Fenik, I meant about the numbers you stated.
The template says 2cm and 4cm
Your post above states 1cm and 2cm
WHICH is it?
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| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 4th 2010, 8:59 pm | |
| 2 and 4 but against armor, it is 1 and 2 | |
| | | Rinoa Heartilly
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Balamb Maximum AP: 2500
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 4th 2010, 9:15 pm | |
| Alright, thank you, I see what you mean now.
I'm not seeing anything wrong then
Approved | |
| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 5th 2010, 7:52 pm | |
| First Random Spells are up... | |
| | | Rinoa Heartilly
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Balamb Maximum AP: 2500
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 5th 2010, 8:11 pm | |
| First of all, NO to the coin flip. Period. To any spell ever. You’re giving the target absolutely NO way out of either effect. That’s godmodding.
Honestly…. There is SO much wrong with all of this, I’m not wasting my breath Fenik. When you post normal Final Fantasy Spells up, since you ARE RP’ing in a Final fantasy SITE, then bump to have your creations looked at again.
Do NOT argue with me on this.
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| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 8th 2010, 5:29 pm | |
| Alright, alright, I got rid of the coin flip and made them effects that depend on the target, and got rid of the random start. I also made random illusion require eye contact to work, and made it a stronger or weaker thing. Random fire is a male/female thing. | |
| | | Rinoa Heartilly
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Balamb Maximum AP: 2500
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 8th 2010, 7:17 pm | |
| *rubs my head* Flipping someone off with an enormous hand? And shouting "WHAT THE F$CK?" Seriously? Ripping a fart at someone? Seriously? YouTube Poop watching Gods? And you would expect others to RP that they're trying to eat you? Or be eaten by you? Weed smoking Gods??? . . . . Seriously? | |
| | | Fenik
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 8th 2010, 7:38 pm | |
| Lol... All in the name of Random Kinzy. All in the name of Random. | |
| | | Kuja
Character Information Gil: 500 Home World: Gaia Maximum AP: 2000
| Subject: Re: A.O. :: Feel the Random November 9th 2010, 4:00 am | |
| ............................................................................................................................ I'm all for random but lets not get out of hand with this...........no to all of them.....just........just no.............. | |
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