Star

Name: Star

Type: Massive Shuriken/Boomerang

Element: N/A

Effect: The illusionist who was this weapon's previous owner enchanted it with an illusionary effect: Any damage done by this is felt, seen, noticed the post after the damage is inflicted. This weapon is a boomerang as well, so it will always come back to me. When it hits enemies it just cuts through them and keeps on its path. It never cuts whoever threw it.

Range: Medium to Long Range (Useful 7 or more meters away max distance about... a half a football field at 50 yards)

Appearance: A massive five-pronged throwing star. I keep it mounted on my shoulder when not using it. When inactive, it will fold into what seems to be an accessory on my jacket, and looks like a knife. If you draw a circle using its points... it is about 3 feet in diameter. It weighs little, about as much as my Katana, probably made of some lightweight steel.

Picture:

Except more mechanical looking because it originated in Pulse and folds up and junk.

Quote :

Any damage done by this is felt, seen, noticed the post after the damage is inflicted.

Huh?????


And same request with this weapon as with your PM's scythe. How big is it? How heavy is it? I know you state Mid to Long range, but everyone has their own perception to what distance Mid and Long range are. So please state how far this weapon can go before returning to the user.

Thank you!

1: You are hit by the shuriken one post. The next you feel and notice it. Easy enough to understand.

I get that. I already know the fact that it's deals physical damage.....But you said in the sentence right before that about it having an "ILLUSIONARY effect." The sentence I quoted right after it was worded strangely, so that is why I need that clarified. WHAT is the illusionary effect of the damage you are trying to convey?


A football field is 100 yards. A bit much for just a throwing weapon. If it were strengthened by the physics of say a bow and arrow, or a gun? I'd get that. But this is being physically thrown by hand. Even a football player can't throw something as light as a football across an entire football field.

Also...

Rinoa Heartilly wrote:

How heavy is it?

Oh I see... perhaps a colon suits the direction of the previous sentence. The illusionary effect is just that. The opponent will not feel or see the wound inflicted until the post after they are hit.

Also, sorry I missed the weight part.

Everything looks fine now. The edited range works for me as well.

Approved