Torrath

Name: Torrath

Age: 16

Race: human

Gender: Male

Home World: The Realm of Midgar - Fort Condor specifically

Alignment: Chaotic Good

Appearance: Torrath stands at 5'8". The most memorable part of his appearance is his face. Unnaturally soft skin provides him with a more regal appearance then his cloak suggests. Normally clad in a set of silver armor passed down from his family long forgotten, and a tattered forest green hooded cloak he is capable of matching his face's regal appearance. However with the hood up and cloak drawn around him, he is still the type of person you see, and then forget.

Class: Assassin

SubClass: Illusionist

Elements:

Mastered: Psychic
Secondary: Illusion

Personality: Torrath is a loner, he dislikes cities, and especially despises armies. He prefers to wander the wastes alone or with a small group of people he trusts. Not speaking more often then necessary, he rarely says more then a few words around people he doesn't know, often speaking in one word sentences or subtle motions. In his spare time he takes pleasure in finding sentries for large groups and practicing his Illusions though various and ever changing methods.

Fighting Style: Torrath uses a combination of stealth and illusions to fight, creating false enemies and distractions and the like. By creating shadow's and hostile creatures, he attracts the attention of his opponents, creating opportunities for him to exploit and land a killing stroke. He has also been know to directly invade the minds of opponents on rare occasions and implant suggestions, though this connection is draining and difficult. If possible he would rather infiltrate an enemy group and cut off their head then challenge his opponents directly.

Affinities: Torrath is capable of moving nearly undetectable movement through most types of terrain, and is very strong willed, allowing him to resist weak misdirection and other illusionists.

Bad Qualities: Given his solitary nature, Torrath has not learned to be a competent with people, either in conversation, or in combat. For all his illusionist ability, Torrath never really learned to fight, consistently going for what he hopes killing blows rather then actual skill.

History: Torrath was brought to Fort Condor as a young child, long after the passing of Cloud and his friends. His caretaker never spoke about where he had come from or what had happened to his family. He spent many years in that tower, learning from the people there. From them he learned to move silently, and to kill without delay or remorse. It was not until his 14th year that his mental abilities became apparent. During what had started as a game with some of the other youths, he began to feel endangered, like he would be harmed, and that was when his mind lashed out. An illusion of a large beast sprang forth before his attacker. In his fright, the other boy tumbled over the edge of the escarpment. Luckily he managed to grab a hold of a ledge and saved himself, though not before hanging over the edge for an hour. Scared by his ability, Torrath was driven away from the Fort, though not before his caretaker took him aside and presented him with a wonderful gift. The last memento of his family, his ancestral armor and sword.

In the days following his exile, Torrath traveled to Junon. as he wandered the city, he could not help but feel overwhelmed by the people, something about their presence pushing on his mind. He fled from there and returned to the wilds, watching over his former home from the woods below. Honing his stealth skills and testing his mental powers.

Now it has been many months since his banishment, and Torrath has used his training well. Stalking through the forests and plains he feels more at home in the wild then he ever did within the Fort's walls.

Good app but there are a few things that need to be fixed.

Personality: Make it a bit longer, it's kinda short.

Fighting style: Just a bit more detail, after all you want to put how you fight in different situations.

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allowing him to resist misdirection and other illusionists.

Maybe allowing him to resist weak misdirections and illusions but not all, that's a bit overpowered with no other reason then just will power.

History: I like it but make it longer

Ok, take 2

Hmmm meh I'd like a bit more but that's my opinion lol


APPROVAL BY THE KAZU

*gives the young man plenty of rewards* Thank you for joining the site, it is good to see that we got not one but two new members in such a short amount of time. *is happy*