Jaix' SOLDIER Form

((OOC: FIRST OFF, I know that jaix isn't a soldier. I plan to compensate for that. PLEASE don't flame at me for making a SOLDIER form...))

Name: SOLDIER

Cost: Costs 90 MP to activate.

Requirements: No other SOLDIERs (Zack, Cloud, ect) may be present. Jaix must also have at least 50% of his MP when killed...

Description: Jaix, upon near death, becomes covered in Mako. It doesn't really change him that much, but covers his skin in a silver similar to that of the moon...

Good qualities: Double Agility (Users must roll an even number to hit her) :: Double Strength (Attacks Deal Double Damage) :: Double Speed (Attacks an Extra Time each turn) :: Lasts till death

Bad qualities: No Self Control ((Confusion for rest of Form)):: Takes more Damage from attacks :: Lasts till death ((Like, he can't deactivte it upon will or anything))

History:
Jaix was witess to a SOLDIER first, when he met Cloud. The skills he could use were far better than anything Jaix himself could conjure up. Training with Cloud for as long as possible ((he was still with Krystal)) he eventually leaned how to mke a substitue form of the SOLDIER skills. However, it could only be actuavate upon his near death...

bumppity...

STOP BUMPING DAYUMMIT!

A few things on this need adjusting or at least explained...

1) costs all MP but you only need 50% of your MP when killed, that doesn't add up.

2) activates when he dies, wouldn't you be... well, dead. Dead people don't fight.

3) no self control - you are controlling him at all times, how can he possibly be out of control?

4) we don't have HP, so how can you have a 1/4 of nothing?

Well, it costs all MP at the time i'm killed. So i need at least 50% of it.

Well, normally, yeah. But instead he comes back to life temp.

I mean like he has confusion (50% chance attacking himself/ally) and can't get out of it

Ummm.... okay, i have nothing for this one...

1) Give it a proper figure of MP, half of whatever max you have at the time isn't fair. You could have 30mp and it would only cost 20mp (not 15 because we only do multiples of ten so is rounded up) which is unreasonable for all the upgraded stats you get.

2) Put itso that it activates when he nearly dies. If he's dead, he's dead, no resurection.

3) That's fine, but be reasonable when choosing to attack, much like the confusion of your summon, don't be stupid with it and just attack whatever suits your character.

4) Remove the HP thing... put something like... feels tired and will take more damage from attacks or something.

1) ahh, but then it would cost 500 MP if i had 1000. I tried to make it counter any of those type of things.

2) *sighs* ok

3) You got it

4) *sighs* ok

...Then it's just a waste of that much MP...

Pleas, just give it a figure, it makes things so much easier.

edited adn finalizd, approved?

For double agility, speed and strength, I think you should increase the cost a little.

70 or 80 should be fine.

As soon as that is done it will be perfect!

Finalized, (again), approved?

thanks Cloud